Stock Images (wood textures, book, tape) from sxc.hu PS3 template from console-covers
This is my game cover design for my Design Fundamentals class. I wanted to make my own game designs for my major work x3
Gahh...I liked the 'advanced critique encouraged' option, but it ran away to premium membership ;_; A little bit of critique anyways please?? P.s. The heiress logo is a crappy 5 min job, don't talk about how crappy it looks XD
um i would be critical but i think i would be overly so...=S. it really depends on how harsh you want me to be. If you really want me to be critical i will, just say the word.
Um debz encouraged me to be critical considering this is for school and all.
okays - firstly great cohesion and flow between both pages is great, done through same background obv.
um - okay. firstly i think on the back cover that the story book look is a bit over done, like its not really all that fresh or original.
I don't reall think that the front cover's imagery maximises the space you have - which when wanting to promote and be eye-catching is something you need to do.
On the other hand i love the logo/title.
I'm wondering if the background/wood stuff detracts from your inmagery because thats what my eye is drawn to.
This is of course subject to debate and i hope that gave you something to consider.
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I'd buy a PS3 just to play it! (and that's a massive compliment! :> )
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....I can't remember the rest, but your mother's a whore.
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[J]
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Im just another dreamer... ><
I recognize all the characters!
I'll give you a critical analysis if you come online tonight
Plus I worked on wwwj2 hehehehe
okays - firstly great cohesion and flow between both pages is great, done through same background obv.
um - okay. firstly i think on the back cover that the story book look is a bit over done, like its not really all that fresh or original.
I don't reall think that the front cover's imagery maximises the space you have - which when wanting to promote and be eye-catching is something you need to do.
On the other hand i love the logo/title.
I'm wondering if the background/wood stuff detracts from your inmagery because thats what my eye is drawn to.
This is of course subject to debate and i hope that gave you something to consider.
Other than that its all pretty good.
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....I can't remember the rest, but your mother's a whore.
P.s. Soz I forgot to give your dad your pressie >.<!!! I was half asleep and sick when he said goodbye!!!
P.s.s Did you get the sims 3 for your bday?!
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Tanks dude!! *waits for you to wash your face*
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