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©2009 ~Lunarescence
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Stock Images (wood textures, book, tape) from sxc.hu
PS3 template from console-covers

This is my game cover design for my Design Fundamentals class. I wanted to make my own game designs for my major work x3

Gahh...I liked the 'advanced critique encouraged' option, but it ran away to premium membership ;_; A little bit of critique anyways please??
P.s. The heiress logo is a crappy 5 min job, don't talk about how crappy it looks XD

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:iconumbreontbh:
This is like the coolest/cutest thing ever.
I'd buy a PS3 just to play it! (and that's a massive compliment! :> )

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....I can't remember the rest, but your mother's a whore.
:iconlunarescence:
Aw~Thank you so much :3

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:iconjasminrose99:
Dude, this is awesome! =PP

[J]

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:iconalittleless-blonde:
um i would be critical but i think i would be overly so...=S. it really depends on how harsh you want me to be. If you really want me to be critical i will, just say the word.
:iconalittleless-blonde:
OMFG TRACEEEY!!! (this is debz on tegans account) BUT OMG THIS LOOKS AWESOME!!!
I recognize all the characters!

I'll give you a critical analysis if you come online tonight :D

Plus I worked on wwwj2 hehehehe
:iconalittleless-blonde:
Um debz encouraged me to be critical considering this is for school and all.

okays - firstly great cohesion and flow between both pages is great, done through same background obv.

um - okay. firstly i think on the back cover that the story book look is a bit over done, like its not really all that fresh or original.

I don't reall think that the front cover's imagery maximises the space you have - which when wanting to promote and be eye-catching is something you need to do.

On the other hand i love the logo/title.

I'm wondering if the background/wood stuff detracts from your inmagery because thats what my eye is drawn to.

This is of course subject to debate and i hope that gave you something to consider. :)

Other than that its all pretty good.
:iconumbreontbh:
Nooo~ problem :3

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....I can't remember the rest, but your mother's a whore.
:iconlunarescence:
Tanks 8DD

P.s. Soz I forgot to give your dad your pressie >.<!!! I was half asleep and sick when he said goodbye!!!
P.s.s Did you get the sims 3 for your bday?!

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:iconlunarescence:
YAY WWWJ2!!!! *happydance*

Tanks dude!! *waits for you to wash your face*

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